Let Me Take Your Sorrow

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Let Me Take Your Sorrow

By Jane Tawel

June 6, 2024

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Let me take your sorrow,

if only for an hour

For I am old, not like you;

no longer armored with pangs of youth.

Let me take the tears you ache too much to shed.

And I will let grief flow through me

as your fast stream flows free,

flows free through my slow-moving sea.

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Let me take your anger

until you need it again.

Let me take its energy

and keep it safe from misspent deeds.

And when you’ve rested and had some play,

I’ll give it back again.

Then you may lead the charge

to change the world once more.

Then you may slam the doors

on past and future visions of hate.

And in the house of my own self,

I’ll shut the gate on letting loose

the rage on life’s injustices.

Your anger’s safe with me

until you know its rightful cause,

until you know your strength.

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Let me take your fears.

For I am old (though not an elder).

(Elders are wise and I am only willing.)

And though I’m still afraid to fall;

I’m more afraid to see you tumble down too far.

I’m not afraid to stay down there.

It’s often peaceful in the depths.

I’ve loaded up a life with care

and carefully, I throw old baggage out.

And piece by piece, what’s left of me,

must t’wards the end, walk fearlessly.

The greatest fear of all draws near.

And nearer, nearer does Death come.

I have nothing here worth fearing,

Except the nearing end of all the life!

Of All The Life and All The Love!

So let me hold each of your fears.

I’ll hold them close, while we sing lullabies.

I’ll wipe your fears away like baby’s tears,

cradling your fears within my ample heart.

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Go! –live your life!- not fearless- No!

For fears protect and fears can guide,

but I will gently rock them,

so you may pick them up again,

when they’ve become at least more stilled.

And when your fears grow quieter,

then you will find their shadow strength.

Yes, you will find the strength in fear.

Yes, you will find dark’s might.

And even Life-Death’s greatest fear,

the fear of endless night,

will be the greatest strength of all,

the strength of how to live each moment, right.

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Oh, let me take your sorrow,

your anger and your fears.

I’ll take them all for hours,

for days, and months, and years.

Oh, let me take your tears and grief,

and let me take your rages.

And like a tree with many leaves,

and like a book with endless pages,

you’ll shed the dead;

write more beginnings;

and I’ll keep listening,

keep being willing

to take your pain for just awhile

that your soul can recover.

And even when this life of mine,

has passed away and seems all over,

I’ll still be there beside you.

I trust somewhere,

somehow,

some days,

my spirit will reach out to yours.

For Love will always find a way.

And I will take your sorrow,

and I will take your anger,

and I will take your fears;

and fly them far away with me.

And fly them far away.

And you, oh, little, precious bird,

will live to fly –

will climb as high as you want to climb.

And you will know that suffering,

is yet a strength along The Way.

And you will rise, and fall and rise again,

to live this precious moment,

to love this precious day.

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© Jane Tawel, 2024

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Jane Tawel

Still not old enough to know better. I root around and explore ideas in philosophy, spirituality, poetry, Judeo-Christian Worldview, family, relationships, and art. Often torn between encouragement & self-directed chastisement, I may sputter, but I still keep trying to move forward.

7 thoughts on “Let Me Take Your Sorrow”

  1. Jane,

    To see you and read your words touches my heart. This one brought tears to my eyes. You’re such a beautiful soul.

    These words hit particularly powerful and poignantly:
    “Oh, let me take your tears and grief,and let me take your rages.And like a tree with many leaves,and like a book with endless pages,you’ll shed the dead;write more beginnings;and I’ll keep listening,keep being willingto take your pain for just awhile…”

    much love and peace, Karla ❤️🙏🏻

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    1. Ah, Thank you, Karla. You who have experienced so much pain and met each day with hope and love and the knowledge that there is One who does take our burdens and helps us carry them. Much love and peace back to you, dear friend. Jane

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      1. Thank you, Jane. It’s my blessing to be here and to “see” you and feel your heart and spirit. You’re such a gifted human being—good to the core. I’m very inconsistent in being here. It’s hard. But I’m so filled with gratitude. I’m so happy to know you are here, too. I appreciate you so much. ❤️ Shalom and love.

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  2. Jane,

    I like the idea of passing over emotions to be held and returned. Sometimes it can feel all too much and we can share the load for each other. What a beautiful way to love someone. I am draw to these two parts in particular.

    I’ll give it back again.

    Then you may lead the charge

    to change the world once more.

    Your anger’s safe with me

    until you know its rightful cause,

    until you know your strength.

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